Pages

Monday, June 27, 2016

Partly Cloudy Writing

We have been learning to use adverbs in our writing. Here is my Partly Cloudy cameo.

Partly Cloudy

Slowly the happy birds delivered a happy surprise to the houses. The evil cloud had his own bird that took everything he made to the houses.

The bird got back but the hedgehog's arms and legs were popping out of the bag.

He was sad because the bird ran away and he placed with lining out the bottom.

One of the nice birds feathers slipped off and made the sad cloud happy because the bird came back and put on his football gear on and the sad cloud made a electric eel.

The sad cloud made a crocodile and it snapped the bird's head.

But he was not like the good clouds.

He loved his bird no matter what he made.

By ENZO

No comments:

Post a Comment