A good piece narrative writing. I enjoyed my awesome writing.
Smashed face
Once there lived two boys who were called Enzo and Nero. The fat one was Nero, he had black hair and he was good at rugby. He liked to play rugby at Ohaeawai club. He went to the club every morning with his Nike bag. Enzo had blonde hair and was as tall as a cupboard. Nero helped Enzo with his kicking. Nero helped Enzo to get ready for the big game on Saturday morning when the grass was as slimy as a boogey monster.
On Saturday at the game Enzo went to kick off to start the game. Boom! The ball hit Nero in the face. Woowoo woowoo the ambulance is here to save you. “Is my face ok?” Nero asked.
“Yes!” the nurse said, “you will stay in hospital for 2 days.”
